Beetlejuice (1988) is an unforgettable film: a rollercoaster of anarchic excess that somehow has a stunningly simple, but brilliantly written plot.
Clocking in at only 92 minutes, the real magic of Tim Burton’s classic film is not only the outrageous visuals or the manic energy of Michael Keaton’s title character, but in the narrative restraint holding it all together.*
Beetlejuice gives us a killer lesson in narrative economy. Underneath the wild production design, cartoonish makeup, and peerless tone is a streamlined plot structure.
Get it? Keeping the story clean and structured allows everything else to run wild.
Let’s dissect how Beetlejuice uses a tight, minimal plot to create maximum impact.
*If it were only these two points, Beetlejuice Beetlejuice wouldn’t be such a terrible film. Alas–I waited 36 years for that shit and 6-year-old me is pissed.
Visually, Beetlejuice bursts at the seams with its stop-motion sandworms, the town model, the Maitlands’ chintzy haunted house, and the Brazil-in-hell afterlife bureaucracy. It is not just a Burton-esque aesthetic; it’s perhaps the greatest single reference point for Burton’s aesthetic put to film.
This is not to mention Keaton as Betelgeuse–for my money, a career best–as the grotesque, foul-mouthed demon with green hair, rotten teeth, and the manic energy of a crack-addled game show host.
And yet when we compare this to the film’s actual protagonists, the Maitlands, we see the exact opposite. In many ways, they are forgettable. I mean I sort of forgot Alec Baldwin was even in it until the rewatch. The contrast is important, however.
The Maitlands ground the story. With such ludicrous characters as Betelgeuse and the Deetzes around, the audience needs someone they can relate to: a calm eye in the middle of Burton’s gothic projectile vomit.
Lest we forget, the Maitlands’ story is in fact the narrative spine of the film.
Here’s a look at the film’s structure in nine clear beats. This framework is deceptively simple but carries the entire story:
In Beetlejuice, no scene overstays its welcome. The pace is kinetic, but the story never feels rushed—because each beat has narrative purpose. Tight plotting enables creativity to explode around it without causing chaos.
All you have to do is look at the abysmal Beetlejuice Beetlejuice to see what’s unnecessary: too many competing narratives, unnecessary characters, a backstory for Betelgeuse, pointless throwback to the original’s wedding sequence, and a totally uncalled-for musical number.
In the brilliant original, however, Burton and screenwriters Michael McDowell and Warren Skaaren kept shit clean: one problem, one setting, one arc.
Beetlejuice has the feeling of a fever dream–but its tight narrative allows it to resolve. (If only we got that more regularly in dreams…).
Compare Beetlejuice to more recent CGI-heavy supernatural comedies with crazy-long third acts like Ghostbusters: Afterlife, Hocus Pocus 2.
Beetlejuice maintains its surreal logic because its plotline never buckles under the weight of fan service or over-explanation. In fact, the third act is simply a sprint to end from once Lydia summons Betelgeuse.
It’s worth noting that Betelgeuse doesn’t appear until nearly 40 minutes into the film. When he does, he dominates—but the film resists the temptation to explain him.
There’s no character motivation. There’s no explanation of his past, except for one minor mention that he was once Juno’s assistant.
He’s a he’s a “bio-exorcist” expelled from the afterlife bureaucracy. It’s tossed aside, never allowed to slow the film’s rapid pace. Betelgeuse works precisely because he is distilled chaos. Explaining him would ruin the point.
Today, you expect the villain’s childhood trauma/origin story to take half the runtime of the film. Shoot me now.
Beetlejuice trusts the audience to accept Betelgeuse’s madness on its own terms. Knowing what to leave out is good writing.
The afterlife in Beetlejuice is one of the most inventive imagined realms in 80s cinema, filled with surreal details: suicide victims become civil servants, waiting rooms are full of mutilated souls, the Handbook for the Recently Deceased “reads like stereo instructions,” and time is illusory.
Of course someone could put all this stuff in a monologue, but it’s a lot more interesting for us to see it through images and situations.
Narrative implication–instead of explanation–is another form of minimalism.
The film trusts the audience to keep up. It doesn’t walk us through each of the ghostly rules one-by-one. Rather, it tosses us into the soup of its absurd logic. We need to figure it out from the inside out, just like our avatars, the Maitlands.
The characters’ emotional arcs mirror the structural economy of the plot. Everyone has a clean, basic journey:
Notice how the film has no unnecessary subplots or romantic arcs (again, contrast the vile sequel). All this adds up to a film that punches far above its weight in audience engagement.
The brilliance of Beetlejuice lies in how burdenless the story feels. The production design, acting choices, and makeup don’t need to carry thematic or narrative weight—they’re expressive, strange, and atmospheric precisely because the story is anchored.
Minimal plotting is a powerful tool in maximalist cinema: when everything else is flamboyant, the writing should be functional at most.
Beetlejuice is often remembered for its style, not its structure. But the only reason the style holds up—the reason the chaos feels fun and not frustrating (contrast that awful sequel again)—is because Beetlejuice’s story crafted with discipline.Beetlejuice reminds us that a wild movie doesn’t need a wild plot. It just needs a clean plot that knows when to get out of the way of the chaos.
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